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He

He,
is but a dust of the earth
a molecule in the entire universe...

He
limits himself to creed
and binds himself in race
not knowing that he
does not exist for himself
nor for his peers alone...

For he
is a child of the earth
and the son of the universe;
a moon to smile over mankind
and a sun to brighten the faces of those in the dark...

He
may be Aristotle or Elizabeth
or simply the ragged and torn man on the street
no matter who he is
he breaths the same air breath by all;
hesleeps under the common sky,
a sky that knows no creed
and prefers no specific religion nor race...

For he
is a he for the rest of the world.

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  • quantumsurveyor
    February 22, 2008

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    Universal truth here demonstrated in a compelling piece that makes the reader delve deep and think at least for a moment - we should stand and stare however briefly.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 18, 2008
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    Ah.

    Poems like this may free many souls.



    Blessed Be.
    Myra


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    February 17, 2008
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    I enjoyed the flow and message of the poem!

    It really appeals to all...it speaks in layers to be
    enjoyed! It also pulls us together very gently reminding
    us how important it is to remember they we all occupy
    and feel in this world so very populated presently.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen/Seattle. very smartly done!


  • Breathing-Fate
    February 16, 2008
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    Oh My Gosh. . .

    I really love this alot! Good job here! Keep writing. . . -Fate


  • natchstucco
    February 13, 2008

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    The last line kind of confuses me. He is a he. Iknow what you are driving at and really enjoyedthe rest of the script. flow and lay outare well done.


  • motel silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    the images and lines in this poem are wonderful...the theme resonates well with me, concerning the commonality of humankind, from the heights to the depths of shared experience.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    wow everything in this is so powerful and i love the descriptive phrasing that the reader can close there eyes to image simply stunning

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