Calm freedom invites,
luring destinations beauty.
Soft ripples float with ease
disguising futuristic hurricanes.
I step into the mouth of destruction
unaware of a near forecast of horror.
Tides of trouble roll
violently with no mercy insight.
Drowning my graceful existence
as a rouge wave turns my world.
Again everything is upside down
with no way of escape to find.
Ending my hope with sudden death
never to gain solid stature in life.
Clouded visions sink
forever into darkness.
Casting aside faith in love
filling overwhelmed with loss...
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Unconscious turmoil
This is a real left brainer. Works at the deeper levels. Good metaphors with water. It's tough to do dark with that language. You succeeded. Nice emotional upwelling, my ship just capsized.
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Well done, sis...how wonderfully dark, with so much depth and meaning...The last stanza was my favorite as well...excellent work as always...
Love sis
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a good dark piece filled with emotion...the last stanza is a great ending...very well done Cheryl Ann.
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wow this is such a dark and descrete piece your words holding so much within them well done and best of luck
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