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Untitled (help me figure out a titled please)

A relapse in an old chapter that I refuse to call my life

I guess I should fill in the pages

Even though I'm bored to death, I feel so restless in my mind

Who knows what I'll find


Chorus:

A bit used, a bit torn

I'm still here and I don't know why

Betrayed, afraid

Nothing has been set right

I'm stuck; on this relentless thing I call my life


So honestly where do I go from here?

Nothing to the left, nothing to the right

It's kind of empty inside

Rock bottoms hit and I have no direction

So much for imperfection


Chorus:

A bit used, a bit torn

I'm still here and I don't know why

Betrayed, afraid

Nothing has been set right

I'm stuck; on this relentless thing I call my life


I feel kind of numb to all that surrounds

Repetition, I could pull my hair out

It's like I'm drowning in my thoughts, yet my mouth wont move

Let the lyrics steel my soul, just help me lose control


Chorus:

A bit used, a bit torn

I'm still here and I don't know why

Betrayed, afraid

Nothing has been set right

I'm stuck; on this relentless thing I call my life

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    May 16, 2008
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    I liked reading this... not like "OMG, this was fun" or anything like that... but I liked it. I really like how you expressed yourself. I wish I could write like this... I'm really most definately not as good as you are... hah. Keep up your amazing work.

    CrimsonViper