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Shiver

crawling,
crying,
deathly
trying;

Loving,
hating
always
debating..

kissing,
fuck.Ing
screwing
&
sucking

Lips,
so luscious
yet still so firm

what
oh, what
is it
I yearn

to be
aspire.
my one
desire

You?
No way.
You could
not say

Babe-
I love you.
For all
You are

Babe-
Oh, Babe
We've come
So far

Now, Babe...
baby
I miss you much
And Babe,
Baby...
Just to touch

Brings me
to...




shivers...

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  • mikepattonisgod
    February 25, 2008

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    Beauty

    Simple points being made... but it still comes out very powerful. Basically it's awesome because it builds up into a badass conclusion. Fuckin sweet!

    -Joshh