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Empty Void

All I want is
A shoulder to cry on.
All I have
Is space.
An empty void.
I can’t breathe.
Will no one
Help me?
My eyes are
Clouding over.
And you,
You don’t care.
I’m alone in death,
As I was
In life.

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Hmmm. This is why I should always edit my poems.

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  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    March 16, 2008
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    Oooh I love this poem x Can understand the feelings well. Thank you for sharing it with us all x


  • Sf
    February 8, 2008
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    I'm here... this is short, to the point and powerful... the perfect poem...


  • Lady Australis silver member
    February 6, 2008
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    i love you sweety
    n i like thie peice

  • Cly
    February 5, 2008
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    Naturally this isn't true. I have wonderful AP friends and family who are always there for me. I love them and don't know what I'd do without them.