smear the paint.
let it dry.
you look back
and ask
was it worth it..?
A contest entry
- Short and powerful by The Kake Show.
1068 points, ended February 16, 2008, 26 entries
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I kinda like this! Its short, yet has power! -
the last line ruins it for me...
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i'm sorry it ruined it for you, but i don't really understand why. hope you feel better soon!
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awwww. wonderful emotional poem.
great write, and best of luck in the contest =)
stephanie -
I like this. I think smeer should be spelled smeared, but I could be wrong.
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thanks for letting me know. can't believe i didn't see that! i'm glad you like the poem.
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