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no material object means more

The thing I'd chose 'tis one of a kind
no where else shall you find
this precious item that I choose
for I could not live were I to lose
that one thing I can't live with out
'tis my son that I would keep
for without him I surely would weep
he is the sun up in my sky
the day he was born I did cry
he is the thing I would choose
Given a choice of only one thing
my son is what I choose to bring
no object is more rare then he
and even stranded by my side is where I want him to be
you can take your gidgets and gadgets too
if that is whats important to you
But as for me I choose my son
for without him near life is no fun
so listen to what I say
should I be stranded one day
and given the chance to chose an object
I shall decline and choose a person
For a life is worth more then gold


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  • soccer220
    February 6, 2008

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    Very good point here..... this is very touching! I can tell you really put some emotion into it here. Thanks for entering and good luck!