there’s someone in here
most special to me
a life long friend
she’ll always be
we’ve always been pals
throughout life together
through life’s ups and downs
through all kinds of weather
we’ve shared so much
happy times and sad
just not our boyfriends
sharing them could be bad
though grown and apart
we’ve stayed together
friends to the end
we’re sisters forever
in one hand a wand
in the other hand a quill
a creater of things
dreams come true at her will
you know who I speak of
Darlene’s her name
J aime coudre on here
one and the same
as we get older
our kiddies all grown
once again we’re like kids
playing games of our own
she’s one in a million
my sister, my friend
she’s in my heart forever
right up to the end
dee garner
© february 5, 2008
Author notes
For my sister, my best friend, Darlene, aka J aime coudre
www.allpoetry.com/j%20aime%20coudre
Image created by Darlene Sperber
Border and pic adapted by Dove just for J aime coudre and not for public use
www.allpoetry.com/dove
Just one example of each of their creative talents... and yes, Darlene really is my sister
In a list
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime Bonus Group Contest by BabyChronic0304 by Jessi-desensytized.
450 points, ended February 12, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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'tis good to show once in awhile our appreciation of the friends we know and love dearly, a good piece of poetry.
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Hi sis,
Just dinking around for a few mintues so wanted to come back and re read this wonderful poem you have written for me..Last night I quickly read through it and it made me cry...tonight I read it slowely and it made me cry...Thank you so very much for writing this for all to read...and especially for me to read..Hugs,
Darlene
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aww i loved this one!! Definitely partner in crime material!! My sister is like this too
thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest!
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Ah that is sweet. If I were to write one for my family...it would be slightly different...I'd use words like, "jerk, ingrate, imbecile, etc"
Oh, I stretch things a bit.
Haven't seen her name around recently, hopefully she's ok.
You two are good people...wish the site had about 200 more like you...you're a Mod, I'll give you a list of names of people to get rid of...
Dove did a background for me ages ago, a purple cow thing, I bet she doesn't even remember who I am.
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Thanks for the cool comment, Yem. Yes, Darlene and I are very close and have a lot of fun together whenever we get a chance to. Sal and I are going to visit her and Bob in October for her 70th birthday party... of course she had to bribe us with some fun stuff planned but she always does that... plan fun stuff to do.
Lol... I'll add them to our wish list, Yem... there's a lot on here we often feel like closing the door on and more we wish we could.
I remember the purple cow thing, yes, Dove comes up with some really nice backgrounds. So do some others on here. Sometime I'm going to teach myself how to do that
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This is so nice, i see you have a wonderful relative too we are both lucky women to have them in our lives. Of course they are pretty lucky to have us too Good luck in the contest
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It is friendship through anything that arises,to be able to share the emotions and the thrills/sadness and grown kids, you show your friendship through and through...thanks for sharing...Moons
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Sweet tribute...We can all us at least one of those...
Hugs...Eddy
Tech...to avoid the double "name" could use fame
or even "it's one in the same" Mere suggestions as always..
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Ahhh... thank you for catching that for me, Eddy. I didn't mean to double that up like that. Your idea works great for that line you mentioned.
And thank you for the sweet comment
love and
Mum
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Awww a gorgeous dedication to your sis! Made me smile and giggle and wish I had a sister. Very well written and expressed.
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Ohhhh this is so precious, awesome feelings felt throughout this piece, best wishes always to a dear tender hearted gal you
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