So Many Thoughtsof the Past...

So many thoughts,

so many words,

come in one ear

leaving through

the other.

Never a word of kindness

and then today,

when my heart was in peace,

it delved into an abiss

of hurt,

of pain

of sheer rememberance.

I read, I read and read,

until I could read no more;

he'd taken my heart,

destroyed it.

Today that my heart was in peace,

I received and read his empty

letter.

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OurGoldenYears Page
February 6, 2008

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hearts ripped apart, torn to shredds, but yet memories still linger in Old love letters, sad but well written, good luck...Moons
Disturbed Prodigy
February 6, 2008

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emotions on high after reading this, i mean it is sad, lonely, something i know more about then i care to, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
longlife
February 6, 2008
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100 congrats
Are you really 100 LOL! really are you??? WE 10 year olds beleive anything. This is a very creative poem.You did a great job.Sorry but you disobeyed the rules you were supposed to start your poem with either of these word "The gold open doors" OR "The empty love letter" But this poem is still a GREAT poem.
sapphireangelwings
February 6, 2008

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I think we all delve in to the abyss from time to time! This was lovely in form and heavy in emotion! I liked it a lot! Good luck!
sunshinegirl
February 6, 2008

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Sad and lovely thoughts all rolled into one wonderful read! You did a great job on this one! I can kinda relate to feelings in this one. I think a lot of us will be able to.

Best of luck in this contest!!!!
ten thousand cicadas
February 5, 2008
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A heartfelt piece, with lovely, but sad thoughts.