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So Many Thoughtsof the Past...

So many thoughts,

so many words,

come in one ear

leaving through

the other. 

 

Never a word of kindness

and then today,

when my heart was in peace,

it delved into an abiss

of hurt,

of pain

of sheer rememberance.

 

I read, I read and read,

until I could read no more;

he'd taken my heart,

destroyed it.

 

Today that my heart was in peace,

I received and read his empty

letter. 

 

Letters

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    hearts ripped apart, torn to shredds, but yet memories still linger in Old love letters, sad but well written, good luck...Moons


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 6, 2008

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    emotions on high after reading this, i mean it is sad, lonely, something i know more about then i care to, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • sapphireangelwings
    February 6, 2008

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    I think we all delve in to the abyss from time to time! This was lovely in form and heavy in emotion! I liked it a lot! Good luck!


  • StarEyes
    February 6, 2008

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    Sad and lovely thoughts all rolled into one wonderful read! You did a great job on this one! I can kinda relate to feelings in this one. I think a lot of us will be able to.

    Best of luck in this contest!!!!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    February 5, 2008
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    A heartfelt piece, with lovely, but sad thoughts.

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