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Mi Amor Andrew

M y heart skips a beat
I lose myself in your eyes
A mongst all the radiant blue
M y mind streaming with
O nly thoughts of you
R eminiscing your kiss
A ll the times you held me close
N ever once letting me go
D aring me to love deeper
R ealize my hearts fate
E verlasting devotion; bliss
W ith you, my angel

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  • PonyPride
    February 12, 2008
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    Beautiful peice here. The flow was marvoulous and your words of utmost grace.

  • wendymolly
    February 8, 2008
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    nicely done!