High above the rolling hills I fly
Soaring like a falcon through the sky
I am Garbonzo the Wonder Dog
Soon I will be falling like a log
I sure hope my packer was not dumb
I cant fold my chute with no thumbs
CNN and BBC will both watch me land
To the cheers of poodles in the stands
I will strut about and mark the ground
I am Garbonzo, the parachuting hound
A contest entry
- roah rrye ripss by Applehead.
1000 points, ended February 19, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol cool a parachuting dog haha well i can imagine it would be more than his lips flapping in the wind
Well done and thank you for entering.
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lmao chuckie you make me laugh..its wonderful, best of luck, hope ya win!!!
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I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Totally weird. Maybe you have a brain after all (although your foolish comments on a poem of mine suggested otherwise). Claps if only to show you I can ignore your childish nazi insults.
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Thanks. By the way, while I do disagree with you completely from a political standpoint, I certainly recognize your talent as a poet.
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Nice take on this,lol good luck in the contest
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