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It was freezing
A bone-chilling cold made to paralyze lungs
Resting firmly, I awoke in bitter passion
Flesh beating within me
I spoke to my heart softer than anyone
Please forgive me
My actions conducted the thoughts needed to be done
Bless my hatred
Fearing for all who stand before me, God
I wept as I cut through her chest
Still beating patience with none to hear her screams
Locked beneath steel and stone
I obeyed her every wish
Calling for peace, every incision peeked into my world
There's an angel sleeping before me
Who's blood shares the same red of my own
My breathing taking substantial form
And regret's now sinking in
They'll pursue me
But I'm far pass the hills and now flying above
Billions of stars now surrounding my love
My persistant manners of killing them one by one
And each time I wept
But what I did I thought needed be done
I swear

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  • Hated.
    February 6, 2008
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    wow thats realllllly realllyyy good ^.^


  • InMyFlames
    February 5, 2008

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    this is so brilliant, i wish i could write like this you have one error on your 2nd last line i think it should be thought. This is excellent