First glimpse
expects nothing more than the love
it takes a second time to own.
A contest entry
- Short and powerful by The Kake Show.
1068 points, ended February 16, 2008, 26 entries
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Nice
Quite powerful for such a short write! Good luck in the contest! -
this is good more powerful then most good job
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awwwww, this is so cute great job!
stephanie
and good luck in the contest =) -
I pays to take a second look, a little deeper beneath the surface... ??? Awesome!
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the feeling of having attraction with another for the first time, is a magnificant feeling. but as you said, it takes another to be sure.
great job and I wish you luck!!
*HxRxG*
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Sounds like some one is being hopeful, of a love once thought lost....anyways; what do I know anyways...just my thoughts; going, going, gone...
but it is done wonderfully if so...
Thanks for the afternoon read here in Canada...
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