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Sell Me...On You

Dazzle me, my love
make me feel your power
please do so within the hour.

A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    sorry my watch stopped, i am not sure how late i am, but i do have a box of chocolate and some wine for you


    • 2lullabyhaven
      February 18, 2008
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      All my favorites and your timing is not off, you're moving on all cylinders, that you are...smile


  • The Kake Show
    February 15, 2008
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    the first to lines are great the last line not so much


  • Abson
    February 6, 2008
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    I CAN FEEL YOU..

    I can feel in in every way and I know that you are real.