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Eyes

My eyes Dispise
Your eyes Disguise
Her eyes tell lies
His eyes always cry
Eyes

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A comment on what you can see in each persons eyes

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  • The Kake Show
    February 15, 2008
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    not powerful enough the simple rhyme scheme takes away from the poem