I smile that smile
Though I lost so much
It cost me a lot
But my smile lives on
He won't take my love
Nor will he cause me pain
I smile and steal back what I lost
Or what he thought he took
I smile like I know how
And don't worry at all
A contest entry
- ~*quickie*~ 10/10/2/20 by LoneFairrie.
600 points, ended February 5, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What ya think
Comments
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Aw this is really sweet! Smiling is the best thing you can do when you're hurt. It's also the hardest. But you can't let the pain win. You would be suprised at how much hurt a smile can fix. Great poem!
Megan -
i love you babe
like seriously. -
Very well done! I like it. Very liken to the play's meaning of the quote. I like that though. You deserve 10 applause but alas I can only give you three
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