In the corner of my room
Green-eyes pear out at me
Mockingly staring at me
With orbs so bright
And all I see
Are those
Monsters green eyes witch mock me
Author notes
Option two
It is the green-eyed monster witch doth mock
A contest entry
- ~*quickie*~ 10/10/2/20 by LoneFairrie.
600 points, ended February 5, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wahoo!! This is so cool sweetie!!!
You deserved the gold!!! Ohhh hope there isn't a monster in the corner of my room now...
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Again I must say that I love the images in your poetry. There's so many ways that the monster can be pictured or interrupted. The monster could be anything or anyone even yourself. I love this concept. Hope I'm not reading too deep into it because it's actually kinda fun.
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It should be Which not witch.. unless you did that intentionally. Either way this is well done. I fear you were dead-set and determined to make this fearfully difficult! Great Job!
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