can you picture
a rose flying through wind...
robin pollinates
of that in his belly
A contest entry
- Short and powerful by The Kake Show.
1068 points, ended February 16, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I don't think I need clarification, but if it's not totally clear, you know
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Indeed it does. i never looked at a robin in that way. Good luck in the contest

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Thank you for your kind words. I had really liked the comparison I had here. The contest is already closed, and good luck isn't where I want to follow (anyway).
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its ok it didnt hit me like some of the others
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well now, never thopught of it that way. thanks for sharing.






