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Stolen




Like a thief in dusk's darkness
stole her heart with one piercing gaze
penetrating her existence
easing inside her effortlessly
touching her carefully
then took her forcefully
she had no awarenss
her soul had been conquered
all she knew was that she fell
right inside his citrine eyes

Author notes

Prompt: 1. "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief". Othello Quote (Act I, Scene III).

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