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Current Feel for You

here in discontent, wondering on remaining thoughts
all because you’re oblivious to how you feel. . . . .

Author notes

..::well.. theres this guy.... hehe::..
Enjoy!

(( Exactly 15 Words ))

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  • LostInTheDream
    February 15, 2008

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    hmmm

    I like it, the format could maybe be better, but its still a short and powerful! Good luck in the contest!


  • The Kake Show
    February 15, 2008
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    i kida liked this
    love is a great insperation


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    ahhahaha:
    well there's this guy...hehe
    thats a funny way to ignite curiosity =P lol
    but nice poem, i enjoyed it
    good luck in the conest =)
    stephanei