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Thief

I was robbed today
All I did was smile
Witch drove the thief mad
he ran way leaving everything behind
I smiled and i stole form the thief
So when you being robbed smile
at the thief you may get lucky
and
Rob him instead of him robbing you

Author notes

option 1 The robbed that smile steals somthing from the thief

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 5, 2008

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    This is great and something that I must
    remember! Hopefully, this doesn't happen
    though. lol Great work here and good luck
    to you with it!




    Jeremy0826


  • LoneFairrie
    February 5, 2008
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    Great! Even better. Though you might wanna run a spell check. Bravisimo!


  • LoneFairrie
    February 5, 2008

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    I like it! Its clever, but its kind of short. I think that only adds to the poem though. Great job and very great write!