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A Tunnel

You see a light at the end of the tunnel
It's not really an escape
It's a reflection
An illusion of light to come
When in reality all the light is long gone
But the brightest past hides the truth
Hope for the future makes now more bearable
Even when the future only knows cold and darkness.

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“Rawr Monkey”

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  • Luminescence
    February 27, 2008

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    oh... this was cool.... very nice poem and a wonderfull read.

    Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck.
    ~lumin


  • vampireblood
    February 19, 2008

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    Wow, I really like this alot. Its short, but says alot. I really liked your first three lines. Very good job. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
    ~Vampy~