His lofty language
motivated me to
visualize what he verablized
Causing a climatic crescendo
throughout my being
at his touch
Leaving me
Longing for Love
A contest entry
- Looking for Favorites by just-an-amateur.
600 points, ended February 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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a good piece of poetry, and that is the power fo words i think, to be able to leave us visualising the essence of a poem or the spoken word, whatever it may be.
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Amazing, that's what I thought. A tidbit of punctuation here and there might have helped the flow some but still. Your imagery and good choice of words really drew me in. The alliteration was fantastic and at just the right moments. Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest!
~M~
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