I can feel tension in the pack
the adults are all wispering behind my back.
They are worried about something big, that much is clear
but they make sure to not talk about it when I am near.
Mommy is very busy,
running arround until she is dizzy.
I wonder what is going to happen, I wonder what is going on
because the tension in the pack is all wrong.
Author notes
sorry about my spelling
my comp is acting up.
my user name is Elvenfairy. I am a pup named Cody in the pack.
A contest entry
- Eastern Wolf Pack War by zhaniswolf.
600 points, ended March 1, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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luvz it
they make sure to not talk about it when I am near
i make my friends do that all the time
great work keep pening cece -
Great job you made this sound like a pup talking.
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Nice going Cody (pup)! Me and Bumblebee are going after those hunters if they come near the Eastern Wolf Pack. Just know that we have everyone's back. Good luck in the contest.
Ted E
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I always hated that growing up, adults getting quiet whenever you came near. My father would always add in a comment like, "I'll tell you about it later, away from pryng ears".
I agree with Zhanis Wolf. The spelling adds to the perspective.
Very nice poem.
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You're my pup!!
Thank you for entering. Don't take this the wrong way, but it was done as if she was actually writing it in that age. If that's not how it's supposed to be, don't tell me lol. Great job. -
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well a pup isn't going to write an adult style poem now are they? Yes, it was ment to be Cody writing it, it's all part of my charm.
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