Edwards note:
Its my fault,
what I am is bringing you pain,
which in turn is killing me.
I will not hurt you,
so Im going away,
I will never come back,
I hope you understand,
its over,
and dont worry,
I will make sure it's like...
I never even existed.
Bellas response:
I walked in,
only to find an empty room,
he wasnt there,
then I see a small piece of paper,
on my pillow,
I open it already shaking.
tears silently fall from my eyes.
There is nothing left,
no pictures, no nothing.
My heart just walked away.
.....
That was the day I lost everything,
became a mindless zombie.
isolated and so cold.
only to stare out the window and wish,
that he might come back someday.
Author notes
" It will be like I never existed" -Edward
option 1
A contest entry
- Stephenie Meyer's Based Series Round 2 by HappinessInMisery.
525 points, ended February 18, 2008, 8 entries
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Very... average no offense. I would give you the typical "Well done. Good luck" But I feel like being honest with you. It fails in comparison to the other entries based off of that quote. I thought you might like to improve upon it to improve upon your chances of winning. Hey look at me being honest
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