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the butterfly

The strong wind blows
the butterfly struggle to fly
but the wind lifts her up
as she passes by.

So the butterfly goes
through some of the strifes
and so we are not alone.
But we need to enjoy life.

When we see the butterfly
that tells us that could be
fragile for them, too.
We will start to feel free.





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  • IansCyberspace silver member
    May 25, 2008

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    uplifting

    Every person feels the strong winds of adversity at some point in their lives so you can feel with the butterfly in its struggle

  • Linny9
    March 1, 2008
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    This is a lovely write about the butterfly.


  • paullallady silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    what a wonderful poem with a terrific
    metaphor. This has wonderful imagery
    and such a graceful and peaceful feel
    to it. great job on this one!

  • cindy4
    February 23, 2008
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    A lovely poem. Nice metaphor.


  • michellemybelle gold member
    February 23, 2008
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    Nice metaphor of butterflies and humans. this feels like fresh air. Lovely.
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • forty-one
    February 23, 2008

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    For me, the butterfly is a symbol of beauty, and grace. The women who appeal to me, often times are called butterflies. This was a very nice poem.

    41


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    A beautiful poem. Lovely imasgery. I love the comparison between humans and butterflies. Both seem fragile at times but endure the harshness of life. Great write. You take care, Sandy


  • buffsab99
    February 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    I really like how your write tells us to enjoy life

    • Chrissy03
      February 23, 2008
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      Thanks. I liked your poem about butterfly, too.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    This is a delightful poem
    Butterflies are fragile yet strong as your words say
    Thank you for sharing
    Julie x


  • Kelli Marie
    February 21, 2008

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    Whether in our fragile times or not we can still be strong as the butterfly. A very well written piece of poetry.
    Kelli

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    February 21, 2008

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    Chrissy: lovely Nature write. I love the butterflies which frequent my yard and patios. This is a beautiful write.

    Lady D


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    a very sweet poem! although fragile as they are..butterfly's excel in beauty.

    keep up the great writes!!

  • piccola silver member
    February 21, 2008

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    this write tells grandly of how fragile life is for the beautiful butterfly and reminds us that our life too is fragile and beautiful. Thank you for sending me this link


  • z etoile
    February 21, 2008
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    Oh this is wonderful! I love the analogy of a butterfly! Great job!

  • Janie5
    February 6, 2008
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    Very good. Beautiful imagery.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    February 6, 2008

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    Great poem about the butterfly--full of beautiful imagery painting a picture, not only of the butterfly but how you feel about the butterfly!

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