As I step off the dock of my reallity
The deck of the ship I call life
Begains to shutter and shake
I sail off into the future
Expecting failure,hoping for adventure
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended February 6, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent--Well written & Versed--Congrats on the silver in the contest!!
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LOL...sorry this is a great and serious write, yet I know it and feel it everyday...we live and learn or stop both...
Well done.
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Very interesting. I feel as if this is unfinished. It needs more. I really like what you have here. It is very descriptive with a nice deeper meaning. I like what you are saying.
Great write... Keep writing 
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