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Dinnertime

I really am everso hungry,

I have such a rumbly tum,

I'm going to eat all my dinner,

It's fruit from my lovely mum,

Yum! 

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A contest entry

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  • islekine
    February 5
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    Too cute...just like Millie!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    February 5

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    I remember having a couple of hamsters as my kids were growing up. You must know something about those wee critters [for they sure love their fruit]Best wishes in this contest,
    reenie

  • nothinghere silver member
    February 5

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    This is so cute, and what an inspiring little critter.. well done on a great and humerous write here, goodluck in this contest

    Karen


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    February 5

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    Aww that's so cute My friend who took the photo really loves this and so do i!
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene