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My Heart

My heart is yours,My thoughts are too.
My mind is saying,"Speak to you."
I cannot say what I wanted too:
"I Love You"These words mean
Nothing nowadays,tossed around
Like a meaningless phrase.

I wonder if I were to say,
These words, would you walk away?
Or would you respond and say,
"I do not care if you love me,
You know I don't.I'd rather go with
some other folk."

To these words, my heart would break,
Yet though you have made some mistake.
I will you on a silent mount,
To sit and wonder, forever in doubt.

My heart could've been yours,
My thoughts too.
Never again, will I speak to you.

Author notes

This poem was written after a very close friend of mine, who would always confide in me, decided to turn his back on me.

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  • broncotwister
    February 5, 2008

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    Dear Lord I hope that ain't me

    I hope I never betray you in such a manner. It's a touching poem, one well-written. Bravo, KitKat.

    James "DogSojer" McAmis