My one and only,
the day is almost here!
the day of love and happyness,
sharing our love.
I do hope you adore your gift,
I know it will mean alot to you,
just as my gift from you will mean
everything.
I know our relationship,
has been kinda rocky since I messed up,
but we just have to look to our future,
and keep our heads up.
I love you more than anything,
more than you could ever imagine.
You perfectly fill my heart,
so empty before you,
but now so alive and full.
I would risk my life for you,
becuase without you I would have
no life.
I love you
My sweet valentine
Author notes
this is written to my fiancee...i love him more than anything
A contest entry
- Love by a-face-in-the-crowd.
450 points, ended February 7, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wonderful
This is really good. I love how the poem reads like a love letter. There is so much emotion in this poem. My favourite lines were
"I would risk my life for you,
because without you I would have
no life."
It just describes so perfectly what true love is like.
Thanks for entering my contest!
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