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I miss you,
I miss your smile,
Your laugh and even your tears.
You used to be with me,
You used to poke and tease me,
Hold me close when I was cold.
I miss everything we used to share,
I miss everything we never said,
Everything we swore to secrecy.
You don't trust me anymore,
You don't rely on me anymore,
Don't you see? You don't need me anymore.
I'm just a piece of your imagination,
A piece of your creativity,
Nothing more anymore.
You would laugh and you'd cry,
You'd tell me not to die,
Choking on my pop because you're just so funny.
I miss you,
I miss what we shared,
Miss that you don't call me anymore.
I used to be your everything,
I used to be your rock,
Your very best friend.
Somehow that changed,
I didn't see it coming,
But I guess there isn't a damn thing I can do.
I miss you,
I miss your smile,
Your every joke and that fairy tale ending.
What happened to us?
Why didn't we make it?
I should be scared, but I'm not.
I can take it,
I will stand alone,
And cry alone too.
I don't need you to walk,
I don't need you to listen to me,
I just need you to promise me that nothing will change.
Even though it already has,
I'm willing to accept that,
To learn how to be on my own.
I love this feeling,
I'm doing things I never dreamed of,
But I still clutch our photo and cry.
I miss you,
I miss you everyday,
I don't know what mistake we made.
I just miss you,
You were my other half,
Won't you come back?
I miss you,
Your smile and your laugh,
Your jokes and your tears.
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Author notes
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Don't really want to explain this right now. The feeling may pass.
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baby, nothing's worth losing a friendship ♥ xoxo
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most excellent.
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thanks.
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Wow this is so powerful! Its really beautiful and so full of emotion! but i can't help but think...call me tomarrow? Message me?
~emmy♥ urmyrock/urmyhardplace/i'mcoolwithit♥
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Can't help but think...???
Yeah, I'll call you tomorrow if I get a chance. Since I started Math I've been getting a load of homework. I hate my Math teacher too, but ANYWAY if I don't have too much homework, I'll call you. I'll try. Promise.
Gotta go, I've fo 37 Qs in Math.
Ick!
erica♥xoxoxo
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awww! i have this problem to actually! its a really great poem! i enjoyed reading it keep up the good work and i will read more of your work!
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Thank you!
erica♥xoxo
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For five minutes after I read this, I just sat at my computer and struggled not to totally burst into tears. You captured the utter pain of losing a friendship perfectly well... too well. I can completely relate to it, as I'm sure many others will.
There were several parts that especially affected me; my best friend used to poke me, too, and he held me once because it was cold out. I don't know what happened with us either, really. It's been months since this whole thing started, and I still haven't been able to let go completely. It hurts so bad to hold onto something that isn't there anymore... but it would kill me inside to forget what it was like, to lose that frail and possibly vain hope that there's still a chance for us to be friends again.
Thank you for sharing this. Thank you so very much.
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Awww, this comment almost made me cry. I'm glad you liked it, but I'm sorry about you and your friend. It's hard, isn't it? And it doesn't ever really get easier. The thing about friendships is that it's always there for a second chance -- maybe not now, or next month or even next year, but maybe one day in the future, which could be years or decades -- you'll get your second chance. Sometimes all it takes is a long talk. Sometimes it takes a screaming match. Really, I don't know. I guess it all depends on what happened. But you're right, it hurts so bad to hold onto something that isn't there anymore.
I'm really sorry about your friend, and I hope you two get the second chance because I think friendship is a beautiful thing and when we lose it, well, it really, really hurts. I hate crying about something that I know won't change right now. I guess it's true what they say -- every relationship takes work, some more than others. Maybe the work's just too hard? I don't know.
I really wish I had the answers to my own questions, or yours, or anyone's really. It's just...hard to figure out what the question is sometimes if you know what I mean.
Wow. I kind of got off topic there...
thanks again,
erica♥xoxo
ps.
I have NO idea if any of the above makes sense, and if it doesn't, well, you know...just politely ignore me.
that's what I do 
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