Mesmerize by the waves
with steady swaying of the motion
I felt coerce to stay
silence calm my pounding headache….
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I must say, this was quite beautiful, but it's lacking one thing: one word. I will give you a little bit of time to fix it.
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Thank you I added one word.
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Lovely


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i like this one, very nice =)







