holding ever so tightly
my love you are with me
you are my only mighty
reviel the truth and see
that there is only us two
i fear nothing at all
i only belong to you
our love will never stall
i don't need anyone else
for you are all i desire
not knowing anyone else
life together is not dire
i have chosen my only love
as a gift from God above
Author notes
this is one of my better sonnets i think, yet i haven't completely made it sound as good as it could have sounded.
oh well hope it's what you were looking for contest holder person (even though i know that it's not)
anywayz....thank you for letting me attempt it!!! or at least try (lawlz)!!
i think that it sounds a little coocy
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I think this is a lovely piece of art work!!!!!! How wonderful to have know such a love in your lifetime!!!!!
For one so young I think you are very mature in your thinking and you writing!!!!!!! Best wishes on your life and writing!!!!!!
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It's stated that this required a name and explaination of method used in forming a sonnet in your author's notes. I see niether. It's also a stated nature themed contest allowing personification in metaphor. This is not. I appreciate your efforts.But because it is so off on rules that apply and I'm only allowing 10 entries. I'll have to DQ it. You are welcome to write and post another one if time and open slots permit.I'm sure sorry.~Suseann
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oh well
i didnt really understand, what you need sorry
didnt mean to leave you with nothing of that which you asked for...
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