If I was stranded on a desert island
There'd be one thing cluched in my hand
You can take away my clothes, and jewerally and such
Because I love this thing to much
I don't need radio or TV
I don't even need my CD
I love this thing more than I love my brother
I would never swap this thing for another
This thing is my biggest joy
It's my greatest toy
When I have this thing I'm happy
Take away this thing and I feel crappy.
I guess you wander what this thing may be
If I was stranded on a desert island the thing with me
Would be my PC
I love my computer so much
That you can take away my TV,CDs Clothes and such
My PC is my life line
I spend most my time
Online, Its away for me to contact
My friends, friends all over the world to be exact
Author notes
I think it turned out well I hope I explained enough why my pc would be the thing I took with me
A contest entry
- What Can't You Live Without? by soccer220.
900 points, ended February 26, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Ha. I liked the rhyming.
Great write. =) -
Very interesting never thought a Pc was such a needed thing. Friends....they are the one thing that keeps people sane. So friends are the one thing i would want with me on an island.
This was a very well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it. Keep writing! -
oh yeah i know exactly how you feel i couldnt even write anything & i dont know why but its not the same.. good write!
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This is a great poem! You explained to detail why you need your PC...... good job! Some of the rhyming sounds forced, but that's okay, I understand totally! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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