Love answers the call
rises to the challenge
expands the domain
negotiates the boundaries
encapsulates the premise
dominates the show
obtains the spoil
fortifies the essence
regulates the effects
restores the pep
entangles the obstacles
releases the shackles
overrides the storm
sanctions the purity parts
accomplices rare feats
remains unaltered
delivers the goods
refuses the negatives
increases all dividends
reflects ultimate splendor
intensifies awesomeness
resembles fulfillment
satiates, infiltrates, educates
overwhelms
rushes the senses
heightens the allure
redesigns the surface
unplugs the stops
adopts willing vessels
marinates with spiciness
blinds hesitation
cures ailments
weighs the differences
instills insightfulness
deems itself unfit for failure
holds it's own
Dips deliciously, despite diabolical distractions...
A contest entry
- Love by a-face-in-the-crowd.
450 points, ended February 7, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this made me think of music, i think this would make a great start to a song, this poem spoken at the beginning of it then the music gently rolls in and the voice takes us to heights, a good poem, happy birthday
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I hope this is called 'free-verse' that's what it felt like for me writing it, glad you liked it
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Amazing
This was such a unique poem of love. I loved the underuse of punctuation, it made it seem like there was just a neverending list of everything love can do, and gave the poem a sense of pace. Some of the lines are just amazing, especially the last line. That alliteration is fantastic!
Thanks for entering my contest!
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Perfectly done. Love sure has a way of rejuvenating us, giving us srength and joy.
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Indeed, thanks for your timely, lovely comment. You caught the gist of this, perfectly...Kudos to you
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