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No Special Occasion...Just Because

Cozy, simmers, warm thoughts

Delightful, soothing aroma

that overflows in tubs of

softened butter love.

Back rubs, tender hugs,

precious kisses upon the cheek,

massages that makes your toes curl.

Twirls of your hair

as we dance to windchimes

outside the window,

and we fall asleep in each other's arms.

This is no special occasion,

I just wanted to

I treat you to a wonderful

evening, of soft music &

2 roses...as we share our Love

on the chaise near a warm fire,

just because.

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Just because I wanted too.

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  • Rheea gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    sweet treat!!

  • Nighttime angel
    March 17, 2008

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    Beautiful

    this is such a wondrous, sensual poem that you have penned. I love it. you have written it from your heart, anyone can truly see that. so much love weaved into this poem.. brilliant poem..

    thank you for entering & good luck

    kat


  • vici377
    March 6, 2008

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    wow.

    sounds like a perfect evening..and beside a fire for the added touch..thanx so much for sharing...blessings to you...namaste..


  • Lyrical Rain
    March 1, 2008
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    I LIKED IT ALOT. THOUGHT IT WAS VERY INTRIGUING AND NEAT. DO KEEP WRITING.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    Good enough reason for me!!! Thanks for the entry and best of luck!!!

    Az

  • The Inc
    February 29, 2008
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    Thanks for sharing with the group.

    Keep penning

    ~The INC."


  • garbait
    February 29, 2008
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    I could use some just because. It's been to long since I've had any.
    Very romantic.

    • Ephiphany
      February 29, 2008
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      Hey,

      I know what you mean. I really do, and I wrote this


  • candyhamilton
    February 29, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL AND LOVLY ALL AROUND THANKYOU FOR THE GREAT READ


  • secberm
    February 27, 2008

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    (I'll try to remember what I typed before the entry hiccuped.) Love the internal rhymes and assonance. Easy flow. Rhymes weren't forced (or painful to read--HATE FORCED RHYME! LOL). Love it. Love it. Love it. One.

    Dez

  • Improv Machinery
    February 18, 2008

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    oooooo, i got the tinglies down my spine while i was reading this. i love the softened butter love part. i wish i would have thought of it first lol. this is such a wonderful write that is full of sweet, romantic sentiments. i love it, i love it, i love it.
    Rob

    • Ephiphany
      February 18, 2008
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      Thanks Rob

      so glad you stopped by and enjoyed this piece.

      Ephiphany


  • Swan song gold member
    February 9, 2008
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    You are gold !!!!

    • Ephiphany
      February 9, 2008
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      Thank you so much

      I love your lil cartoons...so cute!
      E♥


  • darell
    February 6, 2008

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    I'm Feeling it!

    Oh yes babe. This sounds absolutely
    scrumptious! The images are sensual
    and passionate. Romance is everywhere.
    All is left is to get down to it and do it.
    An exquisite pondering of sweet loving
    and romance. Very nice work


    • Ephiphany
      February 6, 2008
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      thank you love

      I appreciate your sensual comment
      Much love, and enjoy this evening I have created
      Lady♥


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    February 6, 2008

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    Oh wow...what an evening you must have had and not to speak of the night that follows

    Sensual it must have bin, as only a sexy Sis of mine can create...
    Damn...I do hope I have the half of your sexiness
    That would make my life so much brighter...and hotter

    Just because I want that too
    XXJeannette


    • Ephiphany
      February 6, 2008

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      Thanks Beauty

      I'm glad that you enjoyed this, and I much appreciate your comment and

      You do have the sexiness....I get it from you
      ♥


  • HaleyMary
    February 5, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. This is written so tenderly and has a romantic feeling to it. I think it is very true of love, that people celebrate some days, not for any special occasion, but that it's just something they want to do in that moment. Keep that pen flowing.


    • Ephiphany
      February 6, 2008
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      Thanks sis

      glad you liked reading this.
      Just a lil something I wanted to do
      Ephiphany♥

  • Aisades
    February 5, 2008
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    This is beautiful piff.


  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 5, 2008
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    Nice. Romantic. Soft and not over-the-top.
    Great flow.

    ~The Inc."


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    February 5, 2008

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    beaooooootiful sissy
    you know how you do

    Tasha


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    Wow,

    Me likes this, alot!
    Thanks for sharing you!
    Much love and light!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~

    • Ephiphany
      February 5, 2008
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      Hey there Timothy

      thanks, been missin you around here.
      Ephiphany♥


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 5, 2008

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    Stunning Writing.

    This is really beautiful you know. Very very sensual. The imagery is stunning. Played every part out within my head. Wonderful writing from a wonderful and gifted poetess.

    Much love to you Piff

    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • ennovy silver member
    February 5, 2008

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    Totally Two-some and so wonderfully written. You capture the simply sweet essence of love. The pic is perfect for the setting of romance...I love the bubble stuff...excellent piece............G'momma


  • pappacass
    February 5, 2008
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    how sweet

    loved this poem my friend, niece, cuz...oh whatever...loved it...lol


    • Ephiphany
      February 5, 2008
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      lol

      can't make up your mind, huh either one is fine with me, Shawn.
      Thank you for the comment.

      Ephiphany♥

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