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The Mooshies

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Down in the garden where the vegetables grow
Safe from the farmer, the plow and the hoe
Under the willow, so stately and tall
Live the Mooshies, one and all

Little Ruftal, dainty and sweet
Their gourd house is hers to clean and sweep
Proud old Grandfather goes by with his cane
Glancing at Grammy out in the rain

Mischievious Nutkin plays in the rooms
Teasing Ruftal by hiding her broom
Then there's Aunty Gilly, proper and prim
Keeping their clothes all neat as pins

Many generations have come and gone
Still the gourd patch represents home
With their neighbors they live and have fun
But they quiver in fear when the cats come

What are the Mooshies you ask with a grin
There’s one on your shoulder, go on, ask him
They have silver hair on head and chest
And if you ask, they like mead the best

Their adventures are tiny and not known to us
But danger still lurks if they’re out after dusk
I found the Mooshies quite by mistake
I was passing by as they swam in the lake

Oh the tales I could tell you of them
The exploits they’ve had and the places we’ve been
But my time here has ended again
I’m on my way to the lake and my friends

I’m sorry I have to ask you to go
But they are cautious of strange people you know
Perhaps the next time when you come
I’ll introduce you over tea and crumbs

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 7, 2008

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    This is a really nice story, great take on the picture. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • Sagerider
    March 5, 2008
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    Beautiful

    This was fun. I really loved it. You have a great imagination.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Wow a wonderful piece, the imagery is fabtastic. You have a very creative imagination. Best of luck in the contest


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    February 7, 2008
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    Yeah, I'll go with cute.


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    February 7, 2008
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    Cute!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    "What are the Mooshies you ask with a grin
    There’s one on your shoulder, go on, ask him
    They have silver hair on head and chest
    And if you ask, they like mead the best"


    Absolutely endearing dear; an envious write indeed.


    • Sylvyrwyng gold member
      February 7, 2008
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      thank you! lol... the pic just brought them out into the open... lol

  • Liquid memories
    February 6, 2008
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    excellent

    loved this, a riot of a read you shared. well done. long live the mooshies. this was cute.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 6, 2008

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    lol, alright i think this was something i mean that you did a great job on this, i looked at the pic and it fits, keep it flowing and good luck in contest


  • Tattboyspet
    February 5, 2008
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    lmao! They sound perfectly adorable!!!!
    thank you - enjoyed this one


  • cricketjeff gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    You see Mooshes having fun
    They go swimming one by one
    The Mooshie expert (that means you)
    Says they don't do it two by two

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