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Punjabi Poem

Haye ni tere khuh da pani, Khara!
tere  nal khedeya hani, yaara!

terian khahlan wich pair dhon nun ji karda
teri pagdandi te turan nun ji karda
terian gauanan chaaran nun ji karda
tere khetan wich tapan nun ji karda

teri chunni sunghan nun ji karda
tere hathh chumman nun ji karda
tere ghade di lassi pin nun ji karda
tere magar turan nun ji karda

tera nakhra sehan nun ji karda
panga lain nun ji karda
teri mitti sunghan nun ji karda
hai ni mera mulkin jaan nun ji karda.

Its purely a Punjabi Poem, I will be thankful for every suggestion, comment or critic. Thanks.

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  • Grateful
    March 4, 2008

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    Hello Pushpinder,

    tuhaadi eh nazam pari taN sariyaN puraniyaN GallaN yaad aa gayiaN...bohut hi changi laggi tuhaadi eh nazam...

    keep writing...Sukhdarshan