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Smile

Your smile,
the brightest rainbow,
is hidden in the cracks of the wall;
just waiting to break out.

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Prompt:- "Sometimes the brightest rainbow can hide between the cracks in the wall"

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  • Nighttime angel
    February 5, 2008

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    I like this one a lot. its amazing what is hidden behind things and how much beauty is waiting to be discovered.

    good luck in the contest.

    kat


    • DarkStatic
      February 6, 2008
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      Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I worked hard on it.

      Thank you!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    beautiful and i could just im a person trapped between the cracks wanting so bad to get out. well done with this

    • DarkStatic
      February 6, 2008
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      You're welcome char. Glad you think I got it right!

      Thanks!