What Makes Me

Alone and stranded

I thank god for the peace

With beautiful surroundings

What else could I need

Lapping up the sunshine

Having a dip in the sea

Making a hula skirt out of

That single palm tree

Though in this haven of serenity

My vanity would proceed

See my lipstick is my saviour

For it's what makes me

Besides a sexy man might also

Get washed up on this beach

05:02:08

A contest entry

What Can't You Live Without? by soccer220. 900 points, ended February 26, 2008, 14 entries
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Wayne Leon Learmond
February 14, 2008

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A very good piece of writing
This is a really good piece of writing. Maybe showing your true desires Katey?. To have all that senerity, and peace. Your rhyme in this is very good too - as is your imagery [which is strong].

I also took from this piece a certain loneliness which was underlying the words. You have a talent that you should keep on using Katey.

Well done for this.
Much love
Wayne Leon
xx
soccer220
February 5, 2008

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lol..... this is really funny. I like your background and picture! Thanks for entering and good luck!
Whyitt U
February 5, 2008

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Love it!!! Absolutely love it! You even got a smile out of me...well done!

Wyatt xxx
- Scrunter
  February 5, 2008
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  Glad it brought a smile to your face hun... xxx