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The Realm of Poetry {Gold}

Dwelling in the realm of poetry,
the written word our guide.

Hearts and tales
make us different,

yet the same...


Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)

© Joyce A. Le Lievre, All Rights Reserved
February 5, 2008

Author notes

PROMPT: 'the other side of the coin'

20 words or less

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Puppydog gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Yes, we may be alike in our formation of words but our stories are different and unique unto themselves.


    • sunny day
      February 23, 2008
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      Kevin, Thank you for coming back to this one. This truly describes a poet in my eyes. I'm very happy that you enjoyed. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Jal Pari
    February 16, 2008

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    This SO deserved the gold!! I think I am going to bookmark this page and read it again and again. You know how they say that sometimes only a few words are able to express a million things? This poem is a perfect example.
    Congrats on the gold!


    • sunny day
      February 16, 2008
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      Navdeep, Thank you for the applauses and again such lovely words of praise for me. It's funny the inspiration we can get from a prompt. There are so many ways that people look at things. My thoughts went straight to these words and I truly believe in what I wrote here. Thank you for the congrats and I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one. It is special to me. Love you my friend, Joyce


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    February 8, 2008

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    Since I've already commented I'll just add a wink to let you know I'm thinking about you. Peace, Liz

  • carole21
    February 7, 2008

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    nice

    very nice and simple write for the prompt . . good use for only 20 words . . liked "the written word is our guide" and "yet the same . . . " and congrats on the trophy


    • sunny day
      February 7, 2008
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      carole, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise you gave to me here. This prompt called out for these words to be written as we are all different and yet the same when we write. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one so much and thank you for the congrats also. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Kiran silver member
    February 6, 2008

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    I'm so glad you won the gold. This is an amazing piece of poetry, full of depth. Excellent Joyce!


    • sunny day
      February 6, 2008
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      Kiran, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise for me here. The prompt just called out for these words and I'm very happy they spoke to you. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 6, 2008

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    you know that is what i named my journal, kind of like your prompt that i think you did a great job on, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest


    • sunny day
      February 6, 2008
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      Aaron, Thank you for the lovely words of praise that you always leave for me and the congratulations. It is a catchy name isn't it! Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    Very creative and unique take on the prompt...How wonderfully true are your words, we are so different as writers, yet we hold a common ground in words.
    Wonderfully done.
    Congrat's on the Gold.
    Best,
    mystic


    • sunny day
      February 6, 2008
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      mystic, Thank you for the applauses and the lovely words of praise you gave to me here. When I saw that prompt from going these words just called out to me. I do feel it is so true to all of us as writers. Thank you for the congrats also. Love and God bless you always, in all ways. Joyce


  • Amera gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    How true, as poets we are different. I sure am glad aren't you? Congrads on the gold; well deserved.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • sunny day
      February 6, 2008

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      Amera, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise as always. This prompt just took me to that place and I was so happy when I opened the contest from my notes to see that there were still two spots left to enter it. I'm very happy that this one spoke to you as it did. And I sure am glad too. Love you my friend, Joyce


  • going nowhere
    February 5, 2008

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    such a unique take on the prompt... i really like how you used the meaning of the idiom. thank you for a wonderful entry.


    • sunny day
      February 6, 2008
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      going, Thank you for the lovely words of praise. That prompt just started screaming out to me. When I saw the notes come across after logging in and how long ago it had been I only hoped I wasn't too late. You didn't give us many words to use and I wanted some reference to the coin thing in there. Thus I had the "hearts and tales" instead of "heads or tails". Thank you for the gold trophy and for the inspiration you gave me. Love and God bless you always, in all ways. Joyce


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    February 5, 2008
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    This is the first of your "quickie" poems that I have read, and I think you should write more of them. Your words are succinct and intriguing. We share common experiences through our poetry, yet always bringing a unique perspective. Good luck in this contest, sis. Peace, Liz


    • sunny day
      February 5, 2008
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      Liz, Thank you for the lovely words of praise you gave to me here sis. The prompt called out for these words to be written and I was happy that there were still spaces available in the contest. When we only get a short amount of words to use we have to take full advantage of it. I'm very happy that this one spoke to you as it did. Love and hugs from your sis, Joyce


  • Frozentearz
    February 5, 2008

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    Ahh this was short but so very much to the point..
    I loveeeeeeeeeed this to bits
    Thanks for sharing,
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


    • sunny day
      February 5, 2008
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      Shey, Thank you for the lovely words of praise you always give to me. This prompt spoke so loudly for these words to be written. When we only have a short amount of words to work with we have to use them to our full adavantage. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one so much. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 5, 2008
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    JUST LOVELY!!!!

    Yes, each and every one of us lets our feelings and thoughts be written in our poems yet each of us though different in thoughts and feelings have this common thread of not being afraid to let our true thoughts and feelings come forth in what we write.


    • sunny day
      February 5, 2008
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      Kevin, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise as always. This prompt shouted for these words to be written. We are all different and yet the same as we write our words. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one so much. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    How so very true, oh sis you know how to read contest prompts, I shrugg my shoulders and think, nice piece here, good luck...
    LInda :rose ..


    • sunny day
      February 5, 2008
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      Linda, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words of praise for me here sis. When this one came across my notes I only hoped I was in time to add to this contest. It was a wonderful prompt from going who is a fantastic poet. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one so much. Love and hugs from your sis, Joyce

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