I see my genie has given me
A lovely choice on this island of misery
All my possessions are laid out like new
And one of them must I choose
I walk the tiny island examining my things
A sly smile to my lips as I think and think
I know without a doubt what I must choose
My friend, I chose to take my canoe
Author notes
Duh! What else would I choose? I will be with all my possessions again, and I can have a homecooked meal now. Yay!
A contest entry
- What Can't You Live Without? by soccer220.
900 points, ended February 26, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
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I think I'd stay on the island too, If there was food and shelter...as I am a meat eater there would have to be prey to hunt.
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Think I will stay on the island with Seashells and we can make our own homecooked dinner, just limited on choices of what to eat. I do know that dessert will be the best treat, mhmmmmmmmm(lol). Good luck in the contest
Ted E
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yummy
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lol....... this is great!!! What a great ending. The obvious choice if you think about it. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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hey this is really good nice job keep up the great work
♥brookeann
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