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theres a fine line

theres a fine line between STANDING ALONE in line than with someone
theres a fine line between LOVE and HATE
theres a fine line between you and the person standing next to you
theres a fine line between EVERYTHING.

do you feel my pain?

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  • Gamool
    February 8, 2008

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    yes i do ,
    i admire these four lines.
    And it's true there is a fine line between everything.
    i really like the message behind this poem,
    good work, and i would like to read more of your work.
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