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The shot.

I bleed.
You cry.
Death.

A contest entry

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  • ccb
    April 21, 2008
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    this one is pretty sad too. awesome for only five words.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    So sad

    yest truth is hate has only one outlet and love lives forever


  • Kelli Marie
    February 20, 2008

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    Five very powerful words. You have caught my attention with this write. Very dark and cold. Sad as well.
    Kelli