Blue surrounds this stranded soul,
Creative, poetic me.
I search for inspiration in the crashing of the sea.
Thank God I brought my notebook!
So I open it and then,
I realise I haven't got a refill for my
Author notes
Prompt: What possession would you take if you were stranded on a desert island
A contest entry
- What Can't You Live Without? by soccer220.
900 points, ended February 26, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very clever of you. Though it would look better if the last line was "I realise I haven't got a refill for my - "
Maybe that's just me.
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This seemed extremely incomplete... I was unable to really get into it at all... I understand the ... idea but meh... I'm just picky I suppose.
TYPO:
I realise I haven't got a refill for my
should be - realize
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lol. Don't be silly, I'm English not Americano. "Realise" it is, was, and ever will be!
Just go with the joke and lighten up, Tarja my friend.
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This one got me laughing! I understand completely how you feel on this one! Funny ending!! Keep up the awesome work, and good luck on the contest.
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LOL! This is so funny! I really like the end..... thanks for entering and good luck! Keep writing!
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