my smile only comes
when i hear the screaming
of my chemical romance and many other bands
so my ipod it would have to be
to help me carry on thorugh the heat
give me ideas and find coconuts with a beat
a rhytem in the sand
cant live without you
please understand how it helps me be
who i am
to sit and sing
to the lovely jams
A contest entry
- What Can't You Live Without? by soccer220.
900 points, ended February 26, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome to Allpoetry
I am a metal fan, but I just can't deal with MCR!
However, I can understand how the music is the one thing that truly brings you happiness...
It is something I know too well.
Rhythm is spelled wrong. I should always be a capital.
Welcome to allpoetry
Enjoy the site
Faerie
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This is a great poem! Your rhyming is excellent. The only thing I would suggest is using more punctuation and capitalization. Otherwise, very good! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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