When love would instigate my final breath
I needn't try to take care of this shell
And neither should I ask you why you left
Though loathe the way you'd never let me help
Then in the river, winds blow me away
To freeze my blood and painful thoughts aside
And if I drown, my loved ones are to gain
For then no more they'll have to see me cry
The wind will listen while advice is ripe
Meandering the words in water's flow
And then, again, found wisdon in the night
So wise I am, yet still, to me, unknown
Now for so many years I've feared the ice
Because of ice cold memories now the past
Neglected by myself while others thrived
In my opinion, and my heart so vast
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WOW!
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beautifully done.
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wow man, I think this is one of the best poems I've seen from you (in quality of language). This is very dark and deep, and totally brilliant! A very well done to you my friend.
xxx
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nice poem.
its deep and says alot about yourself. -
This one is going on my favorites page! The message is so strong. Dark and sad but insanely beautiful
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that's a lovely comment =]
thank you
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