two frogs
two shadows
jump
Author notes
geeeeez... this is harder than writing haiku!!!
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A contest entry
- 5 words only! by LostInTheDream.
450 points, ended February 5, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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this is TOTALLY awesome!!! you should be so proud that you can write awesome haikus!!! i probably couldn't do them that good..... at all... -slick99
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With a restriction of only five words, I can understand it being harder than Haiku, not that I have even tried those.
But you have created a full mental image with those words. Well done.
Ann
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Five tiny words... One giant impact of images. Very nice! ( and I like frogs... hehe!)
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:)) Too cute, it's like leap frog yes? I get an image of the looney toon cartoons on this one, with the singing frogs. Your mind is wonderful and this is delightful.
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wow, this is amazing ... and really, really smart ... what a creative mind you have !
maa
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That is such a cool image. I can see the frogs in my mind playing with their shadows... yeah... I'm still a lil goofy, always have been, always will be
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Playful
Enjoyed that, well done Master!
bj
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Well darn I missed this contest lol. Great five words. So how hard was it? Didn't seem to be hard for ya. lol Good luck with this.
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Wonderful. This is fun. I am having a go...
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Thanks.... and you should... goooood luck!!! Yay...
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Ah!
You are a Master, Master!
(did you hear the echo ... echo?)
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LOL roflmaooooo.... hahahaaa... you're very fun(ny) today my dear!
I hear ya, hear ya, hear ya, ya ya ya.........
in the cathedral -
I said everything
more than once
or
the cathedral
repeated my prayer again
and again
hahaahaaaa
I love echoes.... especially ones of the heart!
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i love this.
the short simplicity of these few words create a great poem.
great job
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lol.... thanks!
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