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Wintertime

Wintertime winds
bring you
closer

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  • individuality gold member
    February 15, 2008

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    An enjoyable piece of poetry, not if you are wafer thin they do not, then they blow you far and wide. A good poem.


  • funpum
    February 5, 2008

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    This is nice. It makes me feel all warm. Of course you might be meaning the collapse of your house...


  • Melodies
    February 5, 2008

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    Wonderful metaphors here. I rather love this 'lil poem!