The sheets called our names and
we complied with delighted giggles.
Dusk came and whispered in our ears,
how tempting you are within the night.
Naked as nature intends for love
and the need of recreation.
I tease you into a erect stance,
and kiss my want of you in sweet trails.
I do not know if the emotions I feel
are that of love or lust.
Yet I know you bring a smile to my face
and in this life I do not enough.
Please forgive me and my selfish desire,
for selfish I am not and have not been
in so long I almost forgot.
I love to hear your sighs and deep
seeded groans of pure pleasure.
I urn to watch your body react
to my gentle caresses and nipping mouth.
Your passion talks to me in a form
of one sensual longing kiss.
Your hands upon my body in liquid motion,
to bring gasps and sighs from the core of ecstasy.
Please love and delight in the things I can give
and hope in the end I can love again.
Author notes
To My Master of Passion
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A contest entry
- Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This Is Precious to me.. I adore it..
"Your passion talks to me in a form
of one sensual longing kiss.
Your hands upon my body in liquid motion,
to bring gasps and sighs from the core of ecstasy
Please love and delight in the things I can give
and hope in the end I can love again."
I like this above... I feel as If I cant and wont find love again. But Like Imma tell you, I keep reminding myself.. YOU WILL FIND TRUE LOVE.. Be patient(which I have few of those)..But itll all come in due time.. :-)
Look forward to reading more of your writes..
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Thank you so much for taking the time to not only read but comment.
I find great pleasure when someone can relate to my work.
I would love to know what you think of my other pieces.
Thanks again for your ink printed upon my page.
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Truely Sweet
This is so exceptional!!! I love the deliciouse undertones and sensual discritpions here!!!!
Truely a delight....
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Thank you very much. All my work is on the same manner, well most of it. Check it out. Thanks again.
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B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!!!! This is truly delicious writing!!! Ms. Apple Pie...u leave a SWEET taste in the reader's mouth.....
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thumbs up
nice write
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me, me, me!!!
hahaha!
good piece, i could FEEL it as i read!
good luck in my contest, and thanks for entering!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
A very sensual write whether its love or lust and I think it's a little bit of both. What else can make us giggle, gasp and sigh? Fantastic poem here.
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Is it selfish when the desired is shared? Is it selfish if what you want, is what the other wishes to give? For the given ecstacy to make one happy, makes both happy in the end? Im sure love will find you in whatever path you wish to take.
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Passionate and sensual
That lucky bastard!
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bravo!
good first start, do more! l.o.l.!
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amazed and dazed I too have been teased to an 'erect stance', thanks, I think(?)
the way you opened and closed made me smile and the inbetween, well, you know----
Joe
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ooooo, this is good....who could not delight in the things you have to give....
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Thank you so very much. This is my heart and well kind of layed out there huh?? well hope he and all like it. Thanks again.
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